tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post5519296486390683846..comments2023-07-31T07:36:04.220-04:00Comments on Twisting Minds One Word At A Time...: Weekend Writing Warriors 8 Sentences ~ That First Kiss by JC ValentineAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02839627295408145565noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-28284823778301769692020-04-02T06:20:27.468-04:002020-04-02T06:20:27.468-04:00Their state of the art 24/7 online ordering system...Their state of the art 24/7 online ordering system allows customers to quickly and easily access expert editing and proofreading services at an affordable, transparent price. <a title="blog" href="https://zinapacking.foliotwist.com/art/womanonmerrygoround/" rel="nofollow">blog</a><br /><br />Jason Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01542972466616286734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-50981803845427124482020-02-23T06:13:17.657-05:002020-02-23T06:13:17.657-05:00It's very difficult to stumble upon the right ...It's very difficult to stumble upon the right essay service for your college needs. That's why reddit lovers prefer <br /><a title="https://www.reddit.com/r/HomeworkCentral/comments/f1s0yq/how_to_choose_the_right_essay_writing_service_on/" href="https://www.reddit.com/r/HomeworkCentral/comments/f1s0yq/how_to_choose_the_right_essay_writing_service_on/" rel="nofollow">https://www.reddit.com/r/HomeworkCentral/comments/f1s0yq/how_to_choose_the_right_essay_writing_service_on/</a><br />leena pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03305485723792061529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-12758363248122297702013-05-20T15:34:16.892-04:002013-05-20T15:34:16.892-04:00Awww. That was a very romantic first kiss. When a ...Awww. That was a very romantic first kiss. When a guy can admit he's not perfect, there's hope. :)<br /><br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">History Sleuth's Writing mysteries.</a>HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-19613228075159223082013-05-19T14:28:14.922-04:002013-05-19T14:28:14.922-04:00What a smoldering moment! Awesome declaration of h...What a smoldering moment! Awesome declaration of his feelings. :)Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11457235963917206588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-43457243640183434022013-05-19T14:27:24.879-04:002013-05-19T14:27:24.879-04:00Ah, that melting moment when the hero reveals he&#...Ah, that melting moment when the hero reveals he's just as smitten as she is. Beautifully written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-13972405133167868852013-05-19T13:45:53.773-04:002013-05-19T13:45:53.773-04:00Oh what a moment! Yes, my mind would come to a scr...Oh what a moment! Yes, my mind would come to a screeching halt too most likely - great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-43005838054765589452013-05-19T12:10:03.827-04:002013-05-19T12:10:03.827-04:00Excellent suggestion, Susan. Thanks! And thank you...Excellent suggestion, Susan. Thanks! And thank you for stopping by. I hope to see you around again sometime :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02839627295408145565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9183712293670257420.post-91814918247254780462013-05-19T09:39:07.036-04:002013-05-19T09:39:07.036-04:00Consider in the last sentence rephrasing the "...Consider in the last sentence rephrasing the "I'll spend the rest of my life trying to be." could be read wrong--just a thought. Excellent #8Sentence. Well written, nice emotion and the scene draws the reader in. Good job.Susan Stuckeyhttp://susan-stuckey.storytellersinn.com/noreply@blogger.com