Sunday, May 26, 2013

Weekend Writing Warriors 8 Sentences~ That First Kiss by JC Valentine

"You look scared," he observed, the corners of his mouth twisting slightly. 
"What are you doing?" Piper flattened herself against the door as Tate tilted his head toward her. 
"Thinking," he said, distracted. 
"About what?" Her heart pounded and she was finding it harder to breathe. 
His lips whispered across hers. "Kissing you."


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  1. I wonder if she is scared or just don't want what is going to happen just yet.

  2. WOW! I know who was the most experienced of your characters. I hope she isn't feeling pressured.

  3. Tantalising excerpt there.

  4. I think he should maintain the thinking and let her do the acting on it part. She seems nervous. Hopefully he'll be sensitive to that.

  5. Oh, I was left with "Don't think, DO!" in my brain. Nice snippet, interesting how everyone reacts a bit differently.

  6. *fans herself* I vote that he goes for it!

  7. Very nice #8Sentence - raises questions as to whether the lady will agree with his thoughts or (at this point in time) reject them.

  8. Oh my goodness. Now that's sexy!

  9. Sexy moment. I like that he gives her warning. It's just enough to have us as readers want him to follow through

  10. Very romantic. I like that they seem a bit nervous. Just get past the first one and its smoooooth sailing. :)

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  11. i like the bad boys on books but i prefer good guys on real life :)
    thx 4 the giveaway...


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