"You look scared," he observed, the corners of his mouth twisting slightly.
"What are you doing?" Piper flattened herself against the door as Tate tilted his head toward her.
"Thinking," he said, distracted.
"About what?" Her heart pounded and she was finding it harder to breathe.
His lips whispered across hers. "Kissing you."
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I wonder if she is scared or just don't want what is going to happen just yet.
ReplyDeleteWOW! I know who was the most experienced of your characters. I hope she isn't feeling pressured.
ReplyDeleteNice 8. They both seem nervous.
ReplyDeleteTantalising excerpt there.
ReplyDeleteI think he should maintain the thinking and let her do the acting on it part. She seems nervous. Hopefully he'll be sensitive to that.
ReplyDeleteOh, I was left with "Don't think, DO!" in my brain. Nice snippet, interesting how everyone reacts a bit differently.
ReplyDelete*fans herself* I vote that he goes for it!
ReplyDeleteVery nice #8Sentence - raises questions as to whether the lady will agree with his thoughts or (at this point in time) reject them.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness. Now that's sexy!
ReplyDeleteSexy moment. I like that he gives her warning. It's just enough to have us as readers want him to follow through
ReplyDeleteVery romantic. I like that they seem a bit nervous. Just get past the first one and its smoooooth sailing. :)
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i like the bad boys on books but i prefer good guys on real life :)
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